Wednesday, July 25, 2018

My Cool Descriptive Writing

I leaped into the air. My hair pushed into the ground, It looked freaky when I was upside down. I could hear heaps of people cheering my name, I whispered to myself “i can do this!” and then I leaped to the floor and gone upside down for 3 seconds. I was scared, but i was brave and proud of myself. My heart was beating so fast like thunder.i see people bow at me.


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    1. this looks really cool teagan nice work(-;

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