Wednesday, June 27, 2018

My planet



My planet
Keywords
  • Glow up water parks and free food
  • Fun discos at night
  • Rainbow glow worms
Topic sentence
It’s a fun friendly planet
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
This is my planet flossy. There’s lots of fun things there
to do like rainbow glow worms, glow up waterparks,
rainbow rides, And more stuff to do there. Theres also
lollipop trees chocolate rivers cotton candy sky.



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